DARE is a book that i just read. its all about a girl that took a dare about a haunted house, she takes the dare and she has to stay the night at this haunted house. Later on that night she hears a voice, its a little girl.....
PLEASE TAKE ME WITH YOU......
She turned around and nothing is there.
She finds a room to sleep in but most of them are locked. Finally she finds a room... SUDDENLY she cant breath. Her mouth is filled with.... COBWEBS!
There is a doll she thinks it might have been a little girls room. There was a story about a little girl locked up by her father, then left to die.
Then she herd something, so she shines her torch, its just a rat.
Then she hears that voice...
PLEASE TAKE ME WITH YOU
Its 6 am, she see the light.
When she walked out side she sees a crowd cheering: YOU DID IT LAUREN. YOU'VE WON THIS WEEKS DARE!
DARE is a T.V show. Every week, somebody spends the night in a spooky place.
Of course its all fake.
There is a big screen that shows the house she stayed in. Ali Scott is the presenter of DARE.
Ali says" What was your scariest moment" ?
Lauren says" There was a voice"
Ali smiles, then she stops and has a look at her notes. Ali says" Lauren there wasn't any voice"
Lauren is a bit confused...
TAKE ME WITH YOU... I AM YOUR FRIEND NOW....
....FOREVER.
It's great to see you have been reading, and this certainly sounds like a great story. I like the way you kept me in suspense wondering what was going on and then revealed the plot!
ReplyDeleteHowever I think you could finish it off a little bit better - I'm a little bit confused by the end of this Review Shaniah?
Looking forward to reading more.
Mrs Nua
Thank you Mrs Nua, yes its a great story indeed.
ReplyDeleteThe end is the little girls voice, maybe i need to fix it up and explain it properly.
Shaniah